Poetry

I think thats great manda, you should be writing more often ... i have something wrote down in spanish, i'll try to make a fine translation and put it here. (please, be gentle... im TRYING to translate).

let's start:

..::Waking Up::..
"Rusty sound on the other side of my cell door
Open my eyes, trying to see over an inccomplete darkness
I want to stand up, but my body still hurts
Take a deep breath...but it burns my lungs
im mumbling in sorrow but no one can hear me now
lying at the bottom of this cell, built of my own ravenously
Im waiting patiently, i want to escape, but is not possible
there is something that holds me here
So im staying in confinemet
Im hearing voices, thay sound familiar to me,
but i cant reach them, i can barely understand
Now i try to raise my arm just like to grab something
but it's not responding...i try to cry but my face feels like stone
im my own isolation, im desperate
I dream of the end of my agony over my inhuman silence
With every minute pass, the lights starts to fade out
Every sound goes away like a distant echoes
Suddendly my cell starts to convulsioning
My body becomes pain
Every part of me feels like burning
The shock run trough my wrists
Then everything breaks down like glass
falling down in perfect silence
Some voices get louder in the other side of my cell
The door opens in a bump
its late
everything turns to silence
all seems to fade like a mirage
Finally, the wait has come to an end."

Well , that is for now... i know that there is no rhyme there, but is the way i like.
If you want to read it in spanish... you should visit my space.
If you saw something wrong on my writing , just tell me and i'll fix it.

Best regards!

Whoa...that is amazing!
You write sooooooo well....
You have a gift, dude!

thank you, but maybe thinking that its a gift is just too much... but thank you very much!

Well that's what I think...
I use to wish that I could write like some great poets do...
Now I'm glad I have this talent

omg ur writings r awesome both of urs r.